There's some improvement on this cover compared to the last one, you're noticably louder and I hear a little more passion in your voice. It can be better, but it's an improvement.
Your covers would benefit from better mixing. I think the audio clips (is too loud) from each line sung (the end of one line, then the very beginning of a new line, where the lines intersect a little). If you use audacity, you can "normalize" the intersected sections. You can probably search up audio mixing for music/singing, because I'm not very good at mixing singing myself